My First Story Attempt

[Malcore]

Well I got bored so this here is my first amateurish attempt at a story. I really could not think of a good, plausible, set-up to have two hot babes in skintight outfits fight at the time, so I just went with two spies from cliche-sounding spy organizations that would be at home in a James Bond film. Similarly, I think I got a bit tongue in cheek at times and I really am not terribly happy with how this came out. In any event, I submit it here to you all for some friendly suggestions, comments, and hopefully maybe to entertain one or two of you. Enjoy, and if it's desired more can be on the way!

Sexy Spy Gets Demolished
Betty Harris was a female agent working for the international terrorist organization ?GEIST,? an organization whose acronym?s meaning was long since forgotten, but it?s dreams of global domination still very much at heart. Betty Harris was, also without a doubt, one of the most beautiful women in the entire organization. Standing five feet and eight inches, she had gorgeous long hair as black as her heart, and a massive pair of breasts that constantly threatened to pop the skintight rubber leotard (with accompanying thigh-high rubber boots) she wore on all her missions. Needless to say she drew the attraction of all her male (and some female) co-workers, despite the constant allegations by some that her rack was as fake as could be.

Betty eventually found herself dispatched on a mission to the Holden Laboratory in order to obtain for the organization a rare nuclear isotope which was needed for some new plan or whatever ? Betty never really worried much about why she did what she did, as long as she got paid it was all good to her. The security at the lab itself was, predictably enough, not a challenge for the gorgeous agent who easily dispatched the feeble security guards with naught but her ultra-sexy body (for she never went about armed, considering it a crutch for those too weak to fight for themselves.) Little did Betty know that the international counter terrorist organization AEGIS (Anti-terrorism, Espionage and Guerilla warfare International Security force) had found out in advance about GEIST?s plot for that night and dispatched it?s own agent; the gorgeous, busty, and blonde femme known as Jennifer Gordon.

As Betty entered the main lobby of the third floor she found blocking her way to the main research lab a gorgeous blonde clad only in a blue leotard, not unlike Betty?s own save for the fact it bared cleavage showing off Jennifer?s amazing chest, that showed off her flawless legs. Jennifer glared at the gorgeous terrorist and said nothing. Both women knew that they were on opposing sides and that one of them would not be leaving that room conscious, or possibly even alive.

Betty struck first, or at least tried to, with a massive left kick aimed at the side of Jennifer?s head, an attack which Jennifer swiftly ducked under and responded to with a quick straight right punch into Betty?s stomach causing the raven-haired beauty to double-over, coughing and with both arms tightly wrapped around her hurt gut.

?Ugh?bitch?.? She spat out between coughs. Jennifer simply smiled as she reared back her left arm and drove a massive punch right into Betty?s pretty face, causing her to stagger back with both hands covering her face. Jennifer quickly closed the distance between them and drove a powerful kick between Betty?s legs and up into her much-used womanhood, causing the sultry agent to drop her hands from her face (revealing a black eye that diminished her faces beauty ever-so-slightly) and instead used them to cover and try and soothe her now pounding pussy.

?Oh what?s the matter, slut, does your filthy cunt hurt? Here let me take your mind off it!? Jennifer laughed, getting into the destruction of poor Betty, as she dropped to her knees and rained what had to be at least 50 punches into Betty?s tortured gut, causing her helpless victim to grunt and groan with each vicious hit. When the brutal rain of blows had finally ended she stood up and left Betty to stumble sideways, both hands now on her gut, before finally hunching over and vomiting her lunch out. She looked up at her foe, still hunched over, with bits of vomit dripping down her rubber outfit, with fear in her eyes. Too bad Jennifer was still not yet satisfied with Betty?s humiliatingly one-sided pounding.

Jennifer approached Betty (who meekly swung at Jennifer to no effect) and, holding her standing by the hair with one hand, began to rain punch after punch after punch into the pretty girl?s face, eliciting shriek after grunt after shriek. Finally, after what seemed like an eternity, she pushed Betty away from her, leaving the punchdrunk bombshell to stand there, swaying and drooling from her gaping mouth (which was now missing a few teeth, further marring her once flawless face) and totally oblivious to the world around her. Now Jennifer would finish the fight.

?Nice tits, slut, GEIST must pay pretty damn well for you to be able to afford implants that big. Hopefully their med-plan covers replacements, because bitch your gonna need them.? Jennifer said with a smirk as she then began to rain punch after punch after punch into Betty?s gorgeous mounds of flesh. After about 70 or so blows Jennifer stopped and laughed at Betty?s large breasts which had swollen even larger and looked about ready to pop. And pop they would as Jennifer locked a brutal vice-grip onto the shapely orbs and squeezed until finally the silicon sacks inside the breasts (they were fake after all!) burst under the pressure, causing Betty to loose one last ear-shattering scream before collapsing backwards onto the floor, spread-eagle and with her arms around her once huge breasts.

Jennifer stretched and sighed as she walked out, having reduced a once gorgeous foe into a mess with deflated tits and a smashed-up face. As for Betty, Jennifer left her there for the security staff to find although she was never found her the next day, causing much speculation as to her current whereabouts.

[MikeJV]

Wow, that was pretty damn good for a 1st try! *applauds* I loved it the Betty did have fake tits and the implants were burst *CLAPS* tho I'm a lil unsure as to what type of "vice grip" was used... I assuming it was a standard grab and squeeze with her hands, but putting a "headlock" on her swollen breasts, or better yet if betty was on her back Jennifer could of used a leg scissors on her swolen tits (not a body scissor, JUST on her tits) and popped'em that way would of been a lil better I think, but I'm NOT complaining you did a good job.

I have a few suggestions you can use if ya want.
1: a lil nudity would be great for me and some others here who LOVE super busty women (I do *SMILE*) in brutal catfights.
2: the 1 kick was good, but I'd love to see more cuntbusting of and by super busty women, in addition to the titbusting like you did to Betty. (might as well ruin her completely right*grin*)
3: depending on what your familiar with, I'd also like to know about how big their tits are with either bra cup size (my preference) or object comparison. (basketballs, beach balls, watermelons, something like that, an object we can identify with for size)

For now, i'd love to see you stay with this spy idea, but if ya want to do a different idea, how about 2 porn stars fighting for a movie role. Or how about an illegal fight club that uses only super busty women. If only the victim is super busty, how about a small chested, short wife destroys A) a huge chested amazon trying to steal her husband, or B) husband has a tall, huge chested younger mistress and she catches them her her bed together. (either is a great reason for a brutal, boob busting catfight.

MikeJV

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ June 04, 2007 08:03 AM: Message edited by: MikeJV ]</font>

[Malcore]

Thanks! Glad you like it. As for your suggestions and whatnot I probably will stick with the spy theme, and that is why I particularly did not cripple/kill off Betty. >:]
As for your particulars
1. Who doesnt! I could'nt think of a way to work it in at the time, but I garuntee it will be in the next one!
2. I for one love cuntbusting as well. Just did not want to overdo it this time. Figure the next one will have lots more :]
3. I figure Betty is probably a DD/E and Jen a big C or a D. I'll work it into the next one for sure.
Glad you liked it, though. I am terribly lazy and motivation to do things seems to randomly come to me in spurts akin to divine revelation, so I have no idea when the next story will be out, or if it will even be related to this one (a sequel is definately coming though!) but I wll try to hammer something out by the end of this month, the absolute latest.

EDIT: Any video game or celebrity babes anyone here would like to see? I think I might indulge my inner nerd a bit before/after I do the sequel to this.

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ June 04, 2007 10:36 PM: Message edited by: Malcore ]</font>

[MikeJV]

DD/E... C/D... is THAT what you call super busty? *cover face in disappointment* I call that a nice start (if we're talking super busty). No offense but I had'em both pictured in the J-M cup area... basketball-size boobs, THAT is my idea of super busty. (think xxx stars like minka, casey james, chelsea charms. That's super busty with implants)

As to game or celeb fights... OMG where do i start? How about game babes and a classic big boobed fighting girls comparasin i'd love to see your version of, with full brutality and no mercy... Chun Li vs Mai Shiranue.

MikeJV

[Malcore]

Hm. Your right, I think I will make them somewhat bigger.
As for your suggestion, maybe. Chun-Li/Mai seems to obvious though, I dunno. My brain is yelling at me that it's been done to death. Maybe Chun-Li/B. Jenet to spice things up a bit. Or if we are talking about busty game girls, maybe Tifa/Someone? As for celebrities maybe, I dunno, Salma Hayek and Maria Grazia Cucinotta? I dunno. My brain is filled with ideas, maybe I should start a poll or something.
In any event I hope to have *something* to show you all "soon."

[MikeJV]

Ya that idea has been done alot, and since that doesn't inspire ya lets mix it up a lil... Tifa vs Cammy. Both are small, fast and agile, both have very long hair, the big difference between them being their tits, Tifa is an F cup and Cammy is a B cup. And personally, I think the other diff is that Cammy shaves her crotch bald and Tifa has a full patch on her mound with smooth lips. *grin*

How's that matchup sound?

MikeJV

[Malcore]

Ooh. I like that idea. I'll definately try and get around to that and a sequel to this story. Which will get done first is entirely dependant on what suddenly strikes me as worth doing suddenly so I have no idea which and when. Hopefully soon! If anyone else has suggestions/ideas feel free to spout them here or in a PM or whatever and I may/may not do them.

EDIT: I think I am going to try doing the Tifa/Cammy story first. Should I do fatal or not?

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ June 05, 2007 09:31 AM: Message edited by: Malcore ]</font>

[MikeJV]

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!

MikeJV